If You Were Peter Pan
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Aug 17 '06
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ha but could have been executed better
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love the front to back style :)
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like the idea a lot! i think it would be nicer if it was a silouhette (sp??) that looked more like peter pan, with cap & fringy shirt thingy, instead of just generic man symbol.
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Congrats on correctly using the contraction "you're" instead of the posessive "your!"
Pet peeve. |
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Haha, I like it. I think it`s really funny. 5$
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superpope - that doesn't deserve congrats. its just the right thing. I simply score 0 when someone has an incorrect synonym replacement.
But yeah, I like this. 2$. could've been implemented a little better. |
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SuperPope, the congrats is negated by the fact that he used the word "flys" in his blog icon... ;)
Anyway, I'd work on a more nuanced outline of Peter Pan, maybe solid color with a green hat... use a font that has lower case letters -- it's a kid's story, so make it friendly looking. For the back of it specifically, use speed lines of the same length (and keep them cropped near the figure and use them sparingly). It's a great concept, and I love the dots showing the flight path. Keep at it, and I'm sure this thing'll get printed. :) |
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It made me laugh, but I wouldn't buy it.
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no no no
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mezo on Aug 17 '06 Love the idea, the execution needs helps.
Don't use the man symbol, actually draw Peter Pan's silhoette. Next, the front placement....is no good. The white line coming out from above pants, can look like semen. Third, don't get too crazy with the tracking on your text. |
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haha
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i like it but i wudnt wear it
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I'd like it without the back. the back is implied.
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cute, but execution could be better. Like putting the falling person on the back doesn't make sense to the people who don't see the front. Maybe put it at the bottom corner or something. I don't like the dots. I'd keep the design on a green shirt
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biesdesignstudio- the word you're looking for is a "homophone"; meaning a word that is pronounced the same but differs in meaning, origin, and/or spelling.
Where a "synonym" is a word having the same or nearly the same meaning as another word. :) Which part do you find to be the most weak in the design? Thanks :) |
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great concept, but... do the silhouette thing and change the font to a handwriting-look-a-like font and it's definetly a buy.
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it's not so much a shirt as something i might've screamed at someone when i was six?
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uhh
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i love it!
change the silhouette and i'd buy it. |
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I agree with the silhouette change, but otherwise I love it. I like the font as it. Totally would wear it.
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I'm gonna agree with popular sentiment, good idea, but the execution's not quite there.
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I third/fourth making a peter pan profile on the front, leave the back the same
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i like it $4
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i would love to see the pixie dust come from the side and a peter pan thats not a stick figure...but great idea
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kelly green looks best. $5
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Good start, but needs work.
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change the font.....simple is good, but your choice is a little generic...maybe make it bolder.....
it made me laugh though |
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I wish the type was bigger, but I LOVELOVELOVE this. Cheers
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Personally I think the man should be falling farther on the back....j/j you know I LOVE it!!!
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