Ah hell, I don't know what to say about this one. It made me laugh. So, I'll throw it out there.

after seeing 'Moo goo gai pan' get accepted to compete, I'm not at all suprised to see this shirt here. It might be funny if it was actually funny, but it's not so it isn't. Pretty basic design level.

would anyone really wear this shirt?

Hmmm...looks like dark comedy doesn't work on shirts. Hey Kallen, what's the Moo goo gai pan submission?

i dont get it

Heymang, all the crayons are white: Aryan.



I can see this being sold on certain "white pride" type websites. Tasteful (NOT!)

The problem with this is that it doesn't look ironic, which makes whoever wears it look like a racist. I know it's probably not meant that way, but the way it is now is just offensive.

i think its FREAKING Hillarious, keep the dark comady alive its all that we have left

no one will or should wear this,

its horrible; not talent wise

I too found it hilarious, but i could go either way.

nowhere near witty enough to be taken ironically, therefore it just looks racist. i'm sure tshirthell.com would love it though

williamr said it perfectly.

Yup, I agree, I'm going to try to rectify it. The irony factor comes with the title, but the title doesn't come with the shirt. I have to try to bring it into the art somehow.

Ahhh a shirt that finally represents the true essence of America “Divide and Conquer”!

Your idea is interesting, but the concept painfully sucks.

ok, crit time :)



I think the idea is funny myself. However, I wouldn't wear this shirt cause I wouldn't want to be stuck explaining it to everyone without a sense of humor. That being said, the design needs work. The front of the crayon box works nicely, good use of typography and color. Overall, the design seems kinda flat (which can work for some designs, but I don't think it works well for this one). Perhaps if you bring in more of a 3d element, or a spare crayon.



One thing that bothered me: the black part of the box shouldnt match up with the widths of the top and side of the box... it should be slightly less wide which would drop it back in space (unless you wanted that flat feeling I guess).



Hope that helps, keep submitting, you have some nice creativity flowing

also you might be able to drop the text "one superior color" kinda seems like overkill.

This sickens me.

Okay...now that this is complete can you please, PLEASE, PUHLEEEZE start working on a new t-shirt? Here's an idea: Cheap Date



Now you know who this is.....

hahaha, Urine Idiot. (that's to gritsisgood by the way.)

EvilCrows, art should cause extreme reactions. I'll take that as a compliment.

HAHAHA