allready got it "my" shirt - but "damn" it's just kool:p

Yeah kinda cool.

thats lain, isn't it? from serial experiments lain? looks just like her in her bear suit and everything.

right i was inspired by a sculpture of lain - lain rox:)

no text

text bad

nuttin 2 say - say nuttin :D

nice ... this is the $h*t

reminds me slightly of emily strange.



nice though

text isn't always bad! this case it isn't! it's not great, but it's not bad. it's not distracting.



I like it alot. I'd buy.

Manga

either loose the text or make it part of the graphic.

Then I'll buy too! (or maybe 3)

well, the "stronger!" stands for the survival of the fittest, a darwinistic principle, only the strong survive. If you are weak, you have to subordinate. It's some sort of social critic. "lain" is blasting teds plushbrain, because she is stronger and ted can do nothing else than getting destructed. It's teds destiny or fate, because he is not strong enough to prevent. The "stronger!" claim strengthen this statement; or beter said: this was my intention.

minus the girl and the text, the shapes around her are cool

some one who finally understands dynamic angles

hey yah - cool style...extremely cute ;) ...

Love Lain. But you can't really tell what she's doing to Mr. Bear. And I think you should outline the teddy bear's legs so they won't look so cubic and awkward. Just refine little things. The outlining shapes are a nice touch. <3

well,. and if ya like to see, as it looks like on a shirt for real,... browse my profile and visit my site - theres a little snapshot I've taken with ma webcam;)

ahm, ya, I've tryed it, but i didn't get it goodlooking - So I've decided to take the paws out.^^

I really like it!!!

taken from lain

I do like this, but the text on 'stronger' should be drawn in, rather than typed in a straight line. I'd take out the exclaimation point too. I noticed the femiminist undertones. I also noticed that red bit that looks like menstral fluids shooting out at the viewer. Which would be a very unpleasant experience o.o

@all who likes it as it it: Thanks! ^^



@Siph De Neon: first of all; I'm not a woman, so there was/is no feminist ambition or mission. I haven't thought about that point of view jet - but it is an interesting interpretation. However, I guess the "menstruation" association is kind of farfetched:)



I see that some people don't like the type itself; so I guess I'll rework it. I also thought bout using the Japanse "koime" or "gekisuru" as simple infinitv, which means nearly the same. But then noone will understand it, except people with japanese language skillz, thus it would cause a stronger manga connotation, that I don't like to effectuate^^



About the drawn style; I've tested it some days ago and used that fantastic artistic strokes in illusrator, but to me it seemed hard to read. I've also placed it to the right, and within the legs from ted - but as I said befor, I didn't get it goodlooking.





I think it would be good, if a submission could have more revisions/steps, so it would be easier to modify it, without uploading complete new contributions.

Yhaaaaaaaa ,it s cool Männnn ;-)

loose the txt and the red/white stuff behind her (on the left) - nice work though

I cant really tell that shes smashing the bears head in... and if I could I dont think I would have ever liked the shirt at all. and I was really hoping that people wouldnt post shirt designs with tv show characters on it. but of course your free to submit what you want.



I would prefer teddy bear stuffing rather then blood... but I wouldnt buy it even if it was changed, its cute and a pretty good idea. just not my style I guess

@caitcait: true, I can't be everybodys darling^^ __ I like things where you/ I have to look twice. It's kind of those shirts, where people start staring at in a positiv sense (i guess). I've printed it last week on a dark-deep blue shirt and "I" think it looks good - thats why I have submited it to threadless. Sure, there are better Teez out there _ no question! Maybe you like the next one I'm currently working on^^



peace!

i'd buy it and for once I think its better with text

no, i don't like it. but it's not god awful or anything. it seems like you know what you're doing, but i just didn't like the design you did.

I can see the face but what she is doing or sitting or what not is hard to make out

niiiiice! :D

kikkz ass ... i would buy it

i'm not too fond of the text, but i'd still buy it. +5

thanks 4 voting;)