really nice expressions on the cookies, but the composition is sooooo extremely horizontal. it could have been more dynamic if the opening of the cup were facing us a bit.
Like it but it could have been polished up more in critiques b4 sub. Feels rushed. The fact that the image on the tee is different than the sub supports that idea. You never inked in the rim of the glass or made sure you were down to 8 colors.
ginetteginette made a good point about it being too horizontal, but I think it's kinda good on a t shirt since it goes right across the chest. There's a nice eyeline with the streaming milk too.
hehehe, that cookie looks in tremendous pain, i can just see the camera panning above them while the cookie is screaming , "WHYYYYYYYYYYYY?!!?!?!" Great work on that, i agree with ginettex2 about the horizontal placement of the design...i'd like to see some milk coming out of the drowned cookies mouth and maybe some x's over the eyes?
That grieving cookie looks seriously emotionally damaged by this event. Seriously -- that's amazing. I agree with the X's over the eyes comment, and perhaps make the limbs of the fallen cookie bend in unnatural ways. And I'd suggest removing the milk from the bottom of the glass - just leave the milk running along the side.
there actually is some milk coming out the side of his mouth. Very funny. I love the expression as well... and the cookie bits left in the milk... cause that always happens after a cookie gets dunked.
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