Birdy's not dead; just knocked out. Funny if there was little birds (or people?) circling his head, depicting being knocked silly. I really like the window character; great jarb on that.
It does look good on a lighter shirt, that's how I originally had it. However, I think the black tee help reinforce the melancholy mood of the drawing and helps the window to appear more reflective. Thanks for your input!
I'd like to see a small crack/indent in the glass to show where the bird hit it, and also since this is set up like a play scene almost, have the window on one knee looking at the bird and whose face is in terrible anguish over what he has done to nature's wonders!
Thanks for your comments! At one point I did have a crack in the glass. It seemed to be a little bit to literal for my taste. I wanted the joke to be subtle, not over the top. Instead, I added the feathers to show where the bird came from.
About my design