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Your drawing is fantastic. I wish the butterfly had some more line work on it like the rest of the illo, I think it takes away from your beautiful work.
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I agree with shar star that the butterfly just seems flat compared to the rest of the illustration, but great work.
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Yeah, thinking the butterfly was an afterthought that didn't need to be thought, the main image is strong enough!
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The butterfly and splatter definatly take away from the design, amazing texture and style otherwise.
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very pretty. i like the idea of making that kind of machine :) but i dont think image should be centered on tee. i like it more when its in the left corner
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I think you need to keep the style of the butterfly and spatter the same as the rest of the piece, even if it does help make a point thematically
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I like the mood.
The butterfly is from another "world" of mood. It looks like it escaped from another t-shirt. I want more of this guy. A series. Meloncholic, yet I want to live in that world. MORE. |
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(and also, sorry to be picky, but that last puff of smoke that goes into the machine could be a bit thiner for my liking, not that it really matters..)
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