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Make the eye more distinguishable. People walking down the street won't know the title of the shirt when they see it. And at first glance, it looks like a cue ball.
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agree, took me a sec. to understand the last ball is an eye ball-love the polka dots and handwritten speech in the bubble.
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looked like a ping pong ball to me
also, the word ball looks like fall small details though, still very cute |
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thanks for your comments! i taste a lot off things for the eye, it's not simple!! Thanks agian and sorry for my bad english^^
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You mean 'I tried a lot of things to draw the eye'.
Là tu viens d'écrire "je goûte beaucoup fermé choses pour l'oeil" ;) |
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maybe make the eye have veins??
I could tell it was an eye at first, but for the attempted satisfaction of others? |
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^^^ was thinking the same thing
wouldnt the know what eyeballs are seeing as how they all have eyeballs?? |
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Cricket balls are red. I like the eye the way he is; he looks just like the other eyes :-) Great colors.
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This is really cool, I don't think you even need the little quote. Make the eye look a bit more like an eye though haha.
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I agree, that the eye needs to look a bit more like an eye, with a more defined iris/pupil, rather than just a dot. Cute design though.
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