I don't get it completely. the drawings are great and I'm confident you could color and clean them well (i've seen you do it) but I dunno about the concept. I got chewed out for saying "chimps ahoy!" and using monkeys instead of chimps cause they have tails. I got crucified. So... yeah... that's all I've got for now.
yea, the interaction between the bird mom and her daughter is so strong you don't even need to have other colors than them. mabybe just place them in a background. would they live in anest, house or nesthouse? m
I think it might need more characters and background, but I'm just throwing it out there for some feedback.