New design Im working on. Would love to get some feedback. Do you guys think its better with or without the hand? Should I go with a more realistic style for the lumberjack? Thanks!

i think that the hand is good, don't delete it..

k thanks!

I like the hand, without it I think it would take longer to understand what's going on. Def submit this!

I love it. Cracked me up. You must keep the hand- I agree with DanaSpomer, it doesn't make sense without it... And i like the lunberjack like that =D

This is great, keep going with it! I think it can survive with or without the hand... I'll be placement on the shirt will dictate whether or not you keep it in the end.



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The Death of Analog

Hello there. This is a great idea, I'd say keep the hand, add in the colors, and show us the placement. (:

I think the choice is keep the and and get more realistic on the lumberjack or keep the lumberjack and lose the hand. Because now there's a contrast between the two of them. In my opinion: in love the hand, so I would try to go more realistic on the lumberjack. Or maybe lose the lumberjack and only keep the saw. Anyway, love the concept, keep going on with this!

Awesome.

I agree with Fotologica.

And i had a little idea on making the lumberjack more realistic. Give him a lunchbox!



And please! Don't place it in the middle of the chest on the tee. SO boring...

include the hand!

really cool idear! i would like to see the placement?

and i agree with everyone else, keep the hand!

Nice! Could go either way with the hand/no hand. See how it works on the shirt. As long as people can tell it's a sharpener right away. Let's see it with color and placement!



Crit mine if you have time:

Flying Forest

I really like this! def. keep the hand!

Can't wait to see it with some color

I can't wait to see this finished!

this is amazing :)





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I really like it..submit another version with the margins more thick. I like it BOLD..

comment mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56371/Bloo_by_crimz

New design Im working on. Would love to get some feedback. Do you guys think its better with or without the hand? Should I go with a more realistic style for the lumberjack? Thanks!

Really like the style of this.. the close up hand looks better in my opinion... would look awesome on a yellow-y tee.

with hand!

if anything, you should have a full hand at least (forearm could go if you wanted it to)

good point, i dont need the wrist.

Yeah, who needs wrists? hehe

I love this design!



I really liked the character/ personality of the lumberjack in the first sketch. I like how it looks like he's really putting his back into it.



Right now it looks like he is standing in clouds rather than pencil shavings or wood shavings. Maybe make some harder/ more rigid lines?

this is sooo good :) i can't wait to see it finished! i say go with the hand only

I think on a shirt it will be to difficult to spot the little deatles inside the sharpener. Try to make the man bigger.

Other then that it's awesome, i'd like to see the position on a tee.



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really cool. the lumberjack looks a bit too relaxed though. idea is great. can't wait to see it on a shirt..

would you take a look at my WIP

I liked the character from the previous version as well, but I didnt like having a realistic sharpener and hand with a cartoon lumberjack.

I wonder if design the interior of the sharpener would adding more lumberjack's personality?Like tv?bed?or something he really needs.

By the way,I like this idea and I wish I can have a sharpener like this^^



Would you chack out mine also?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55912/Smoker_sVictim



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56186/That_s_Why_Ideas_Never_Run_Out



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56450/Cowboy_Count_to_Ten



http://www.threadless.com/critique/56457/Colour_Fool

I think simpler is better - just the lumberjack without that stuff. It's more like he's at work perhaps with just him.

agreed.

bump

Fantastic!!!

I love this, submit it immediately. I think the lumberjack's expression is fine, it's like he does it all day.



Take a look at mine if you get a chance? I don't think anyone gets it...

Great drawing style. I like to see the hand, makes the whole thing clearer. The lumberjack lost a little of his personality in this version I think.



I could use some feedback too:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/55953/Real_Vampires_Have_Fangs

New design Im working on. Would love to get some feedback. Thanks!



Larger view here

eff you link!



Larger view here

maybe use more solids instead of halftones? I'm not that big a fan of halftones, and I think solids would be "simpler" and perhaps even "cleaner" looking.

looks awesome and i agree with SuperRyan

The halftone does not bother me. I agree that it looks better just on the front of the shirt though.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/55953/Real_Vampires_Have_Fangs

thanks duders

Wow, this looks great and is also very funny!!!

Go for it!

LOVE IT.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56470/Henry_the_80_s



Can you give me some advice please

I think this is awesome...that guy would be super handy! Only comment would be that the shadows inside the sharpener don't really make sense.



What do you think of mine?

Like the concept and the look, really good illustration. I agree that it would probably work better all on the front. Maybe add a little more of the yellow in the shavings on the floor of the sharpener.



Please check out and score So Mr. Kitty...We Meet Again.

nice sbmt.

http://www.threadless.com/profile/997187/b12345/critiques

hey you people are swell.

You might try playing with the colors a little. Right now the bright white of the pencil sharpener is the first thing I see. If you tone things down a little, it'll make the lumberjack dude stand out more.



BTW, great concept and great illustration!