Preliminary design.

had to read the title to understand that the waves was a storm. looks more like a curly oceanwave, despite the dropplets falling out of the storm. maybe make the curls more like a cloud, then the storm would be more understandible?

the dress looks great tho!



when Animals are On Safari, they wouldn't dare driving over little baby humans ;-)

I thought It was ocean wave too. But does it really matter?



I really like the transparency on the dress and the "waves". But I would change the color of the wave for a pale blue or green...or a "colored" grey. And I would try adding a hot color (is it the same in english hot/cool colors?) like an orange to make the shades in the hairs.



Maybe you could also try different kind of blue/gray or greens shirts right now, since a large part of your illustration is in transparency it will matters more than usual.

I really like your use of transparency to give a 'flowy' feel to the whole design. Only one complaint though, I think the face could be more feminized? (is that the right word to use?) With probably sharper features and more girly looking. Also, the neck region, looks too bulky like a body builder :) Hope I didn't offend you.



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Nicely done, although I must agree with the others that I thought it was an ocean wave at first. But I also agree with Ourson Grognon that it doesn't really matter... aesthetically, it works just as well as a cloud would.



My only suggestion would be to try a belt print, or at least to make the design bigger on the shirt. I'm a fan of belt prints in general, but I think this is one design that could benefit from it because it would add another dimension of "flowyness"

Thanks for the helpful critiques!

The woman's face is more feminine. The tee color has been changed to give more of a "storm" feel. I like blue enough that I put a bit around the clouds/wind. Sort of setting them off a bit.

I love the pic very much! But, maybe you can try to change the color of the tee to navy or dark blue, and no efects of glowing around the waves. It seems like the glowing effect doesn't match with the color of the tee now....keep it up and i am waiting for your good work!



What about mine? Care for the blind

would it be difficult to make her riding Side Sattle? I like the glow.. sometimes it is the small details that push something to the next level.



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hi, good pic! i like more the blue background

Check mine please!:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41052/The_pig_eon

I added the smokey effect that you and fujiapple suggested... let me know what you think of the new version, thank you!!



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I agree, if she were 'riding' side saddle the dress would flow better.. but I like it!

The rain seems a little weak for a storm. I don't think the blue halo around the cloud is necessary. I definitely like it better on black.



My latest design: Rebirth

This is Very Attractive!! I love the background and the glow effect! I also like the choice of color! Good Job.

Check out my 2nd version:

A Glimpse From Below

i like in black.. and i agree this is very attractive :)



Also, Rubik Robots - Unsolved Vs Solved is almost ready for submission. Any last opinions? :)

the dress looks marvelous on black, but the overall feel is better on blue i guess.

maybe add lighting to get the storm much more out there?



Animals On Safari, final version?

Nice!! i think it's fine... love the glow effect!! :D

is the girl actually RIDING the storm? ;-)

Any comments on mine?

Now that I'm unemployed, I back to doing what I really like to do.

I've added more detail to the woman and her dress, but I haven't done anything with the raindrops yet.

I pasted a large close-up so you could see the details. For placement; see V2

this looks awesome, very nice use of colors!

you def have to add more closeups with the presentation to show is properly.

how do you do it with the max 8 color limit?



actually, is a gradient allowed..?

does that only count as two colors? that would help a lot :-)

I love the glow in the clouds, very nice.



Check out some of my stuff if you get a chance.

Wow!

It's a wonderful, lyrical design. My only possible quibble is that with such Nouveau-like lines and shapes and curves, it would be nice to extend that somehow into the raindrops, just so the design-ethic of the piece kind of follows through.

More rain and lightning too.

this is great! love the rain and lightning going down at an angle on the shirt, it is very visually pleasing and has a good flow to it....the detail is awesome in the face, my only concern is...is there more than 8 different colors/shades in here?



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This would have to be printed with simulated process which is like photographic printing.

It's great! I love the transparency on the dress :)



What do you think of my Poor Teddy?

oh ok, that makes sense. other then that i really like it!

Again, I'm not sure, the image is fantastic, but I kind of feel the rain might be muffling the impact of the lightning on a black t-shirt.



But that's just my personal take. The design is gorgeous either way.

I'd try it without the rain, but the design is BEAUTIFUL.



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I think the rain is key. It makes the bottom part of the shirt activated in an interesting way, almost like the wind is blowing it. Nice drawing. submit it.

love it.

i preferred without rain...more expressive.

here's mine, take a look too.

good luck - submit it

I changed the rain to Art Nouveau to match the style of the clouds. (Thanks Joe, for the suggestion!)

See V3 for a close-up detail of the style and quality.

I changed the rain to Art Nouveau to match the style of the clouds. (Thanks Joe, for the suggestion!)

See V3 for a close-up detail of the style and quality.

Love it! This is just my personal take, but I think it's finished. It looks incredible.

Wow I really like the design,I say Submit.

I like the positioning of the design on the tee shirt.

^_^



Also can you review my other design

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i like it also. looks so flowing. :)

WOW, that looks great! I really, really like it! I really don't think I can see anything else that needs changed...love it!



Also, thanks for the comment on mine :)

I don't know if someone said it already, but to me it looks like there are way too many colors in this picture to be printed with silk screening.

it's screen printed, and you can have half tones for shades so there aren't to many colors (i hope). but anyways this design is really awesome great job it's really cool! please score my slogans by the way, they need some help

I submitted!

In the submission, I put a link to this, where I've parked some details. If you want to see the whole design - go to V5.

Thank you, all, for your enthusiastic support!

I'll let you know when to vote!

Looks great and thanks for the comments on mine I appreciate it being a newcomer and all.

I think you found the right style for yourself, the dancing tree and this are very successful. Good luck!!

lol this is some Tinkerbell disney esque stuff right here.



The 1st design is actually quite magical to me...I kind of want a black outline or something around it...idk. its cool tho, wish it wasnt so disney but maybe thats jus my sinister demeanor talking.

NICE WORK

VERY DETAILED.

HOW CAN I IMPROVE MINE?

All the transparencies and the painterly detail in the hair is fantastic! Thanks so much for your comments on mine

Wow great job here! has really improved and looks great!

ps. please score my slogans if you can

Yay! It's (finally) up for voting. Have a look-see.

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Yay.. looks really great :) Good luck at the subs, mine just went up too :)

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Thank you.

strange, there seems to be some problem with my vote. it doesn't seem to register and i keep coming across your sub repeatedly =/

GAG!