Not shure about the hopscotch draw, do you guys like it/ have a better idea?

i'd put a bit of color on the little waves that surround the hopscotch

but looks really great man!

nice! i'll try that!

This is real dang sweet.



I'm diggin the water colors.



Hey could you check out my design? I would really appreciate it.

What if the number spots where she touches lights up (using a color) as if it were a touch sensitive light pad? Too digital-esque you think? I think if there is some way to call out the hop scotch spots, that might help draw more attention to them. Nice work!



What do you think about my idea here?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40075/Tightly_Knit

I would love to see the step by step process of one of your designs.

i like NazdaqIndex's idea, and i think the numbers should be lighter. i like the composition though!



crit mine please

Yes this is beautiful... I agree lightening the numbers might help too.

I like your idea.

Just a few comments:

The flow of the watercolor is lovely, but the tightness and control of the curls needs to loosen up to match it's style.

The numbers might look better if they looked like they were drawn with chalk on a sidewalk by a child.

And last:

The red running down her legs from under her skirt really bothers me. It's sooo the wrong color for shadows (I really hope it's supposed to be shadows).

hell yes!

that raspberry color makes it.



you should add more

this is great



A+

woah that looks really coolll

check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40268/animal_parade

looks really good...i think you need to add more colour to the path though it looks a bit disjointed at the moment

check out mine if ya have time please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40357/seeing_double

i'm trying to make any suggestion each one of you said!



i gotta an idea here...the sky will apear like a drawing on the botton, and becoming the watercolor on the top :p

this is looking very nice, you really got something going here. I can't think of any valuable critique for you, but i'm sure you can make this even better.



If you have time plz crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/39852/Smoking_Hookah

This looks really great!

The only thing I can think of is maybe changing the pink on the girl because it looks a little odd, maybe just make it a little lighter.



It'd be awesome if you could check out mine :)

Curser

Very nice work, you submit it!

Very nice... I agree with Francesca about the numbers being either written on chalk or something more alive... doesn't seem to match with the rest. I also really like your idea of going from pencil drawing at beginning of hopscotch, to more colors towards the end.



Would love to hear your feedback

i agree with the numbers being a little dark and maybe adding a slight wash to the waves coming out of the hopscotch, but i'd absolutely buy this!

com as alterações vai ficar melhor ainda! :)

I absolutely ADORE this design. It looks fantastic!



Check out mine if you can!

Shouldn't there be a rock on one of the squares? Nice work! If you get a chance, http://www.threadless.com/critique/38962/Cat_Family_Tree

Thanks

im not sure about the numbers i think they need changing so they fit with the rest of the image in my opinion, good work tho

Amazing!

I really like it.

Keep the raspberry color.



Critique mine if you have the time

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40291/Alpine_Airplane_Adventure

what about now?

Beautiful idea and execution (as always). I'm still not sold on the hop skotch drawing - just not as fluid and refined as the rest of the piece. Maybe clean up the lines a bit and add some color? Also, a pebble might be cool in the distance, like one that would normal be used in a game

yeah i know... i didn't like the hop skotch either...But i'm not able to change it, all things i tryied doesn't work =/

i think i just had an idea :p

I definitely preferred the first hop skotch drawing a whole bunch more! And I guess I'd like to see where you're going with the new clouds.

it's really good. though her arms look a little big/manly. i think this will end up good.

Neither the first or second hop scotch sketches are really the same style as the little girl. I think the second is closer to being right. Try and work on that a little more. It looks good!



Critique my design if you can, I'd really appreciate it.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40624/Quest_iquest_on

Second version is great....I like it bunches!!!

I kinda like the way the hopscotch looks. The harshness of the lines against the smooth background is a nice contrast.

Very cool water color style. Maybe just blend the hopscotch more with the rest of the design.

check mine out, Enalias the Sea Monster

you're a killer man! love it

i think i like it now =)



any suggestion?

Yes that really works with the numbers going into the distance.

Still agree with johnny that the right arm is a little thick towards the wrist.



Always loving your work

Best of luck!



crit me too please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40611/True_Colours

There you go! Awesome work with the squares - but do agree with the 'thick' arm comment. Although, I probably wouldn't have noticed it if it hadn't been pointed out.



I think this is more than ready to sub, man.

yeah, that's a whole bunch better. I like what you did with the clouds too.

thanks ppl!

i'll see what i'll do with her arm, and sub it =D

thanks ppl!

agora sim! :)

Really cool design, love the colours (:

Wow! Need I say more.



Crit mine please!

In case I do need to say more. Awesome!

this looks amazing in comparison to the previous two! i'd like to see what it would look like on the shirt, but just the design is awesome! submit this!

Love the style of this, very distinctive and beautiful. Colors are awesome, the design should just melt into the shirt. Great work.

lookin nice!

Awesome! God, I love that watercolor effect. I would absolutely wear this design. It'll be expensive, of course, but I'd pay $20.



Love her stripey socks.



I'd like to see some placement options. Maybe a huge print across the entire front of the shirt? What are you thinking?



sling some mud at my critique?

ooooooo pretty colors *drool*



crit me back please

YES! SUBMIT!

SUBMIT!!!!!

Submit!!(2)

do the plastic wrist surgery and SUBMIT!

dude you're the king of watercolor

Oh man, I really loved what was happening in V1 with the whole wavy curls surrounding the hop scotch spots, but this is more authentic looking I guess. Although, I have to say, nice way to incorporate drawn in clouds and overlapping clouds fading into the watercolor clouds.



Can we see this on the shirt before you submit?

Very nice!



Check out my latest for the Loves Green contest:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40414/Good_Natured_or_Rooted_In_Love

Go go go sub sub sub.

n.i.c.e.!



what are you thinking about the placement on the shirt? I'd submit this bad-boy. nice, nice.



Could you please help me?

fantastic choice of colours. water colours r also my favourite



Need help about the better version. Thanks

watercolor is amazing!

:)

AMAZING use of watercolor. absolutley love it!! submit, submit, submit!! good luck!!!



Please crit!!

sweeet!

looove the colors.



Critique if so inclined, plz. Danke!

I really like this. Only thing I'd say is that the shadow below the skirt seems a bit too dark. Maybe lighten that up a bit.



Mind checking out mine?

excellent! thing it's well beyond ready now, well done



me please?.

submit,plis!

Wow! This design is da BOMB!! I could see this on the front page of threadless on a model. I do agree with the thick wrist issue, but other than that, AWESOME JOB!!

Wow! This is da BOMB! I can so see this on the home page of threadless on a model. I agree with the thick wrist issue, but other than that, AWESOME JOB!!

Critique mine?

A Glimpse From Below

submit

this is really awesome work. def a 5

waiting enter in site!

i really like this design! i liked the swirls on the hopskotch numbers in the beginning, but i really like what you've done with it all!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/37412/Composed_in_the_Coppice

on votation:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/204455/Hopscotch_to_heaven/showmore,designs

Submit this already!

This is stunning work! I love it!



Please crit mine!

Its much better now, although I would have liked to see the swirl things incorporated somewhere ... not sure where, but they looked nice with these specific colours ... =)

Very nice

I really like this!

No suggestions, this is absolutely fantastic, very beautiful and would look f*#!*ng awesome as a shirt design, very stunning illustration

wow...this is breath taking!
i can't add to what's already been said about her arm...
how did you color this?

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B