This is my first threadless submission! I'd love to get some feedback before I submit a design for review. I'm particularly interested in what you all think about the balance of colored shapes and uncolored shapes, the balance of color, the color scheme, design, etc, and if you think this is ready for submission. Thanks :)
I like the design itself okay but consider adjusting the either the proportion or placement. The design is too large at the bottom as it draws attention straight to the hips. I suggest either shifting the design to appear to wrap around the side of the body or making it smaller.
Well, it's supposed to be coming off the bottom otherwise it would just end in the middle of the shirt, which would look weird. I was originally going to make it a bit smaller on the shirt, but when I put it on the model I thought it looked pretty good that way. Any other thoughts? I'll do some more mockups tonight.
Here are some alternate placing ideas. I think I like it coming from the bottom vs the top (I think it will be easier to print as well). I have a pet peeve of things just ending off in space, and the design was originally supposed to come off the bottom. But let me know what YOU think! I want to make sure this is ready before I submit it. Thanks!
Thanks guys! I think I might submit this soon. I think I try making a flash piece that shows both the smaller and the larger placement and I'll leave it up the Threadless which one they want to do.
Thanks all! I'm currently waiting for the judges to review my submission and approve it for voting, so if you'd like to vote on it, please stay tuned -- watch this critique and I'll be sure to post a link to the voting. Again, thank you for helping make my first experience submitting to Threadless a good one -- so far!