I accidentally deleted the other critique, so here's version 3.

bzzzzzz

i like the changes! the texture is great.

Post Grey's Anatomy bump

Grey's Anatomy doesn't have much of a bump to it, she's like a toothpick.

Very interesting and fun design, Jenra! I'd like it if a symphony was marching out of the kazoo, but that's not the way you are going with this one. Maybe a way to improve it would be to have one or two more lines of sound coming out of the kazoo going to slightly different places on the tee, all with their own colors. Still, i'd love to have a shirt showing off my favorite instrument and only one i have ever mastered! This sub goes great with an old slogan of mine : "I Can Play 'Stairway To Heaven' on the Kazoo."

Outline or no outline?

I don't get it.. what are the shapes supposed to be?



I guess.. no outline

You didn't listen to me. Sahme on you. lol. DEF outline.

Okay, I'm going to submit this today, I just wanted some opinions on whether I should leave the outline around the sound, and should I add the text into the little sound explosions?

Dave Grohl said he'd still model it no matter what I choose, so that's encouraging.

depending on what the text is sure and no outline

Oh. Silly me. It would say "Anyone can do it!"

text options

i think with text, i like no outline

i guess its hard being a kazoo doodler

ask your designer friends

Shameless bump. I want to sub this in a couple hours. Thoughts on the text and outline issues?

i like the text. i like the outline. but the text loses clarity with the outline sample?

Help Dave Grohl decide which shirt he likes best. Life is hard for rock stars.

it's a toss up. either works. :-) i personally like the outline best though.

i lik no outline

I like version 4 much more. awesome concept!

i like it either way! it's a toss-up between outline or no outline. i think you probably already subbed it though if i remember correctly.

I still like it better sans outline but the text looks nice this one came a long way