"tagliati i capelli" = "cut your hair"

suggest me the better english trasnlation!

I left 1 color more...

how can I use it?

Maybe some darker shade of the blue for the earths water.



I'd just have the quote 'Cut your hair'

i disegni sono belli,pero gli occhi della luna nn mi convincono di quel colore,sarebbero piu bello neri o bianchi..si bianchi sarebbero il massimo e la scritta deve essere in inglese perche solo gli italiani capirebbero cosa significa,pero penso che questo tu gia lo sappia:D.. bhe se hai tempo passa a dire cosa ne pensi della mia critique "the birds".

si in effetti mi piacerebbe ancora lavorare un pò sui visi, sia di luna che di terra

la scritta è ancora da rivedere hai ragione, sia il font che il messaggio



cosa potrei scriverci?

I wouldn't use the last color. Less color means cheaper to print, means you have a better chance because I think your design is already very good

I think you should have some sort of darker outline around the earth. you have a stroke around the moon. it would be more unified with a stroke on the earth as well.

thanks all for your suggestions

ok this night I'll improve this design for good



all of you agree whit the sentence "cut your hair!"?

eh se tipo come messaggio ci scrivessi qualcosa tipo:" sei bellissima" come per richiamare il fatto che la luna e attratta dalla terra non dalla massa ma dalla sua bellezza? e magari metterci solo dei cuori sopra la luna cosi fai vedere che e innamorata.. bho mi e venuta in mente sta cosa e te l'ho detta .

grazie stezi, l'idea è carina... ma in questo design il mio messaggio vuole essere diverso... il mondo è inquinato, e noi siamo le sue pulci... potesse il mondo si taglierebbei capelli!

Cut your hair works well! I love this. I agree with Syncos that a stroke around the earth would work well. Also, I don't really see the need for the white shadows/clouds below them. Over all, great design though!!

a friend suggests me "have an haircut"...

"go for a haircut" should be better?

nobody would help me whit my terrible english? :(

it should be "get a haircut"



and please critique my design too if you want. :)

without planets outlines sounds better!

do you like the typo?

need to work on what? :(

I like it a lot. I think you should arrange those two craters on the moon's forehead to look like a curlicue of hair.



Comments?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28947/The_Saddest_Tree

I love this design, it's adorable and fun. I'd say get rid of the shadows underneath them and put the outlines back on, maybe not as thick as the previous version. The text is fine, although the font is a little distracting, the 'a' in particular. Maybe the capital 'a' in that font would look better/more readable. And the placement of the nose on the Earth seems a bit off, maybe move it down and to the left some?

the concepts is awesome ! but maybe the speech bubble could be smaller and different font...?



i'd love to hear ur opinion on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28553/Mother_Nature

i like it, but i would get rid of the shadows and the noses! maybe try a different color for the moon's face!

hope it helped!



plz give me a critique 2!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28976/FollowMe

i like it soo much !!!! submit this one !!!! no change nothing please !!!





give me a critique

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28991/Love_is

how can I change the title of the design?

I like the font, but at first glance the "e" in "Get" kinds looked like a capital "P."



Awesome job though, love the craters on the moon.

really funny!!!!!

very cute



please critique mine: Choose your Weapon

tnx SixFeetSmall: I'll improve this letter!

very adorable and funny! i'd say submit



critique mine too plz

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29118/Prohibitions_To_All_Aliens_On_Earth

ok I think that's good enough

I put this running on



thanx to all off you for yoyr supporte

please... vote my design! :D

AAaaaaaa, I love it! I would totally buy this!

Wait . . . but would the earth - as the supposedly "older" being - listen to the moon as it told it to get a haircut?



Very cute design. I like it! Submit!



Please comment/vote on my design: http://www.threadless.com/submission/179875/Freudian_Slip/

lol. nice. like it a lot



Critique mine?

more contrast with a color bkground?



pls check mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28942/Glorious_Pain

tnx to all good guys help me to fix this design

please support me voting 5 at

http://www.threadless.com/submission/180884/Cut_your_hair/



regardz!