I'm almost sure about the design, but i'd like to know if you'd change, delete or add something. :)

nice idea, i think it looks a bit too much like a orange mobile phone advert for me though, bit too crisp.

some off the stuff in the happy world doesn't look happy, the ice cream with a bite out of its head, the thing with the exclamation mark above it, and a strange tentacle thing.

i think this is amazing the way it is. I would buy this!



Critique Please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27631/These_things_are_Rigged

I think that the ice cream with the bite, ok, it's not he happiest ice cream of the world, but it give a sanse of cuteness unique!

Why the thing with the exclamation mark above it doesn't seem happy? He got a smile!

Maybe i can make thestrange octopus thing happier than now adding a mouth :)

Added the smile on the tentacle thing & halftoned the rainbows!

i mistook the smile was his nose, ha!

i thought he wasn't happy because exclamation mark tends to mean shock or surprise, it made me think of this kinda sign

http://www.australiasigns.com.au/gal/safetygal/thumbs/lrg-184-yel-md-do-not-enter.jpg

it could be a good surprise or shock though.

what does the bad rainbow lead to? it looks like there is already a moon behind the cloud at the bottom.

my favourite bit is the zombie fish.

Ahh no no it was his mouth :)

The bad rainbow leads to a negative version of the happy sun; this can be seen as a sick/rotten/bad sun.

I'll try to fix the "sad world" sun, by making it actually more bad/sick and less "sun" :)

This looks pretty cool... I think with the right placement and bigger it would look better

i like it

it's the same stlye as lotsof the stuff that gets printed

Guys i appreciate your c&c.

3 people voted "Needs work".

May i know in what you think the design needs work?

Just to know what changes and fixing i have to do!

The "sad world" sun is now more sick/rotten/bad

The 2 rainbows are now better halftoned

The design is bigger on the tee



Hope you like it!

The top rainbow is a bit longer I think- if they were the same there would be a better sort of symmetry to it- same with the cloud position. Also, maybe extend the ground out to the left, for a better composition? Like the characters. this is looking great



crit me?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27835/Impenetrable

Good changes

pretty cool, maybe add more texture to the flat art -- kind of like you did in the rainbow.



Great work though!

I was thinking about the 2 rainbows.

I think i'll make them flat coloured, and i'll make the bad one melt like the background.

I like it...

cool idea!

coolness.. when i saw this

it sorta reminded me of yin and yang

Rainbows flat coloured

Bad world rainbow and bad world sun are now melting like the background



Do you like it?

Little edit on the preview image

I really like the design and style. Submit



please crit mine if you have a time

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27882/Clock_works

lol is that Rosewood I see? Just noticed your sad rainbow dark green is perfectly in tact on one side. Might want to muss it up to match. Otherwise, awesome!

Should i submit it?

yeahhhh!!

very pretty.

submit!

mind checking out my critique?

I'm putting it on the running.

Thanks for your support guys! :)

The only thing that bothers me is the yellow cloud - it seems a little distracting, maybe? Very cute design, I like the style.