Okay so read this before you yell at me. There's no face because I've been working on this one on and off forever and I just can't think of the right face to use.



Also, I need some help thinking of a good way to get the joke across without the obnoxious text under the image. It's a work in progress so help me get it moving!

I like the idea, but not the right execution. I like the whole nobody's perfect thing, but a smoking runner? I think another idea would work out better



If you have some time, could you critique my work?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26991/A_Killer_Script

Your cig is backwards. But other than that really fun idea. Keep the no face, fits perfectly.

okay ill just work on the face and shading it and such



and yeah i thought it might be wrong but parliments dont have the brown filter so i had no idea

i sounded like a huge tool and fratboy just now

bump. ow.

I think the joke works without any text.

any advice on possible background? should i have any or no

Maybe a gym-like mirror behind him?

bump

does he have hair for no reason? cuz if not, i think he needs some. and no text, please