I lobve the drooling corporate monsters. This is so damn funny. I don't think little red fish eggs is going to make it. HA! It looks really good on the shirt. I don't think you need to change anything else except maybe the letters coming off of the suit guys heads. Is that the sign for pounds? I dun get it.
looks good! you could put some white in the faces for shading like you've done with the hands. I think maybe you should try it without the japanese text as well.
