Bringing this design back. I hand wrote the text (which was the reason it wasn't accepted, b/c it wasnt hand written). Any other suggestions and can I resub it if I only changed text? Thanks

it wasn't excepted because it was handwritten?



i think that that is a great drawling of a panda, maybe do another concept idk

id throw a bit more detail on the panda. Maybe a Pillsbury doboy hat to add to the poke idea

bobobob: It wasn't excepted because it was typed.

I changed it to the current version.



DrObvious: I like the hat idea thanks

em... maybe add something on the floor. agreed, detail on the panda is needed...

Added a hat to the panda, like pillsbury dough boy!

Didnt get that last comment till now, maybe I could add a bamboo background or something?

nice now for a little detail. like in save the kittens

or protect

This is like deja vu:) Ill get on it (not because you said so though, hmph)

Added bamboo and details to panda

bump

now its coming to life. Id add more bamboo like a whole background. Maybe with both of us working together someday one of us will get a print.

haha, probably you first:)

I just noticed that DrObvious became a member 3 days before me, freaky...

Maybe ill get one printed 3 days before you. The only way to get a print is to build up rapport with like a thousand people on here that way you get tons of critiques and votes.

Well, the designs that I had up (that got dropped:( had about 600 votes and that was after two days, I imagine after 7 days (if it made it) it would have at least 1000 votes. C'est possible!

but those people didnt vote a high score, did they

More detailed background. Im starting to really like this tee now...just thought id say.

looks good, how would you feel about rounding those edges on the detailing on the panda, the left one on the head and left on the belly

seems a bit squished, make the panda wider?

why is he wearing a chef hat?

Rounding edges=no problem

Chef hat=pillsbury dough boy hat, or just random (you dont have to recognize it as his hat, it was more to just add something to it)

i don't think this shirt needs words on it. i think in this case it slightly takes away from the design

Really? Hmm, maybe I should drop it, threadless seems to hate designs with writing...

Anyone else think i should drop the text? Or change anything else? Thanks!

seriously

I would change the shirt color...the blue on the pink is kind of jarring. Also, rotate the panda so that it looks like he is actually sitting on his behind. Right now he looks like he is floating away. And I would shrink the whole thing on the shirt. To make the hat look a little more 3d, I would round the front edge, right now it's a straight line making it look really flat. And probably lose the text.....

Thanks again NuNuveau, all good ideas to work with:)

I like your rain tee by the way, 5$

New options for tee color, placement, and no text. Also, curved hat to look more 3-d and smoothed out some details.

bump

looks a lot better, I like the green the best. But then again I just like green in general. Yeah I havent been online much, doing a summer semester this year and have no free time.

Hey, your back!!! Sucks about summer semester. I just

graduated last week and might have to get a job over the

summer which= no free time:(

Thanks

i like him, just don't get the hat. I'd like him without i hat i think. is he a chef?

i agree, if you ditch the poke wording theres no point to the hat. I guess that was my bad.

ooo like hes the pillsbury panda.. hmm.. i guess u would hafta add some sorta rolls or can of doh..

Which version is in favor: Panda with no hat or text,

or Panda with hat and text (or panda with hat and no text

I guess).

Changed tee layout options...with hat and text or without either

why not black??

black would be good.

maybe on a white tee?



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