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it's ok! Come and see my design!
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i totally agree with you. you might want to add on the top, dear threadless participants. cause if i'm not a threadless user, i would not know a shit you're saying.
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i dont think theres anything wrong with posting a link to your critique as long as you give a somewhat well thought out comment/crit to theirs.
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well, i just glanced over "UP FOR SCORING".....
perhaps that is in poor taste.....but if its UP FOR CRITIQUE, thats different i guess. are there like,unspoken threadless rules to this stuff? lol |
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check mine tooo!!
what do you think about myTee == Tree Of trees http://www.threadless.com/critique/22597/TREE_of_trees |
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There's a flickr group, I have it on my favorites at home, but I'm at school now, blog about it, someone should link you up.
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okay, now I an sooo confused. why is it annoying??? How else do you get people to look????
give it spin, would ja? |
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john- this is is a fine, respectful way to get his point across
i think this shirt could use puff ink, UV ink, superglow, gold and silver foil, and maybe some stickers and glitter glued on. |
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You should really develop a charming cartoony liaison to help the viewer maintain their focus through this difficult courtesy message.
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link texthttp://www.threadless.com/critique/21460/Liver_Fluke
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Now you need one for the recent crop of people that are linking thier designs and saying "Looks great, score mine".
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JohnFarallo on Jul 07 '08
maybey if you could make the model look like less of a "emo "son of a bitch. He makes me want to vomit with rage! Whats your problem? |
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Goooooooooooood point! : ) Hahahaha
Please take a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/24905/Peace_Off |
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umm the text really isn't doing anything for this design.
vin! don't get your panties in a bunch. this is the internet. |
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maybe som shading. i mean...you only have one color so...you can def add some shadows. oh! and more mask...maybe like a big mardi gras mask with feathers. :p
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¡Im que dice a mi mama en usted para hacer un diseño trashilicious repugnante de mala calidad tan sucio que adoro absolutamente!!
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Leave a comment, without pushing your design or critique. If the person wants to they will go to your profile and look at those things.
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Oh yeah, make sure you're working with the shirt templates Threadless gives you. I say this because I don't recognize the white built-in-bow-tie t-shirt.
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This is pretty cool, but I think it's a little too similar to this design. Plus Threadless doesn't print political shirts.
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This Design is a Rip Off, See the original art here.
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this has has been done before! look here
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this shirt is kind of annoying, but on the other hand all of your other designs are really quite nice. i checked out your site and you sure are professional.
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Eh, designs are mostly about being a popularity contest.
Meh. I don't like to do it. But, its part of the game. http://www.threadless.com/submission/182420/The_Way_The_Sun_Hits_Her |
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Yeah, right on sleepy! home coming king & queen game around here, It kinda sickens me! But it's cool, the true artists will prevail and not end up selling there ideas to Mervyns next season.
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i dont think theres anything wrong with posting a link to your critique as long as you give a somewhat well thought out comment/crit to theirs.
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you a fagdizzle, just do people the favor and critique even if its just moral support. god damn
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if you must spam your link do it here
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hahahah, funny one, but that's a lot of text, and will have the "people keep making me stop so they can read my shirt" prob.. right?
But that's some funny sh*t, nice one! |
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I think you should try submitting it, who knows. As for the linking, :P I didn't realize, and I'll stop (just been here around 2 weeks, my bad.)
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Ellogoods on Dec 27 '08
Links are like little treasure chests waiting to be open. Goatse... 2 girls1cup. Indeed. Little Treasures. |
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i think you could choose a better typeface. something more timeless like bembo or baskerville. The leading is too tight for this to be a pleasant read and the tracking could use some work. also, i think the centered type shows indecisiveness. maybe justify it all so that it take on a rectangular shape. this will let you play with the placement a bit more and maybe create a progressive relationship between length messages. hope this helps. can't wait for v2! thanks for stopping by!
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I was about to comment on this practice, but I wasnt sure where to put it - didnt want to stir up a shit storm in someone else's critique blog, lol.
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yea sorry but after a week of no votes i had to start doing something right. but umm as far as this piece i have to be straight up and tell you i dont like it, maybe with a fancier font lol
check out mine pls, thx: Organic_Nature |
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I understand if people don't give any advice and post their link, but I always try to help out. I scratch your back, you scratch mine.
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if only they would listen. Oh and posting a link to your design in scoring on someone's design is tacky as well.
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I don't like his facial expression and the font choice is poor and black type on a white shirt? come on, where are the rainbows and technicolor rain coats??? hahaha
If you get a chance I'd love some feedback. Lamb Shanks :D |
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its not tacky to request input its tacky to try to enforce some some douchey made up pop-edict
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I tried to get people to critique my work without linking for a couple of weeks and got nada from folks even though I add critques all the time and many people take the advice to make their drawings better. So Screw this shirt. Gotta pimp yourself.
Please Critique |
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I don't post any in submissions, only critiques, and I ask hosts before put a link in their blog. you should really submit this and see what happens. and since this is a critique I'll put this here
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OK sorry i want people to check out my design... man i should really just not tell anyone, yeah that will get people to vote for it.
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All designs get votes, all of them, and posting a good design gets you a much better response than spamming.
Use the time you would have spent spamming in drawing/designing, much better invested. |
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I'm so tired of these fucking spam whores
the last time I called someone out they goddamn starting posting shit on my old subs just to be a cocksucker... |
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I'm not sure it's an official rule.. but I won't do it again.. please don't spam my tees though in the future.. I understand what people think of it now! I got anoyed when someone did
Nice, now look at mine on mine - just linking here.. so I get how poeple react.. But I didn't put as short responses as that, and I voted with nice points (on the ones I liked ofc) as a kind of retribution.. But won't happen again though.. An idea is if people get bugged by it - make it an official rule - talk with the staff about it. I'm sure they'd go with it if there was an consensus on it.. Peace. Now look at mine!!! |
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i think its ok to post a link for a critique. why not??? this section is for users to see your design and comment which is very helpful before you submit.
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The trouble is, this is an unwritten law, which those in the know love enforcing on those that are less learned.
P.s. better without the text! |
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apparently theres no statute of limitations on critiques? so there are all kinds of critiques from like 3years ago, still floating around? craaaaaazzzzzy. and thanks for the laugh :)
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thanks for the heads up, my apologies
the comments were meant in sincerity but i was trying to be brief. I'm new at this so I hope not all is ruined. |
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i understand your message, but if this ever got printed, and anyone actually wore it, no one would understand what it means. no go.
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forceofvolcanos on Apr 24 '09
i understand your message, but if this ever got printed, and anyone actually wore it, no one would understand what it means. no go. Newbee, be gentile tory. |
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I haven't laughed that hard in a really long time. Thanks forceofvolcanos I needed that. Oh you were serious? Yikes!
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genteel |jenˈtēl|
adjective polite, refined, or respectable, often in an affected or ostentatious way. as opposed to : gentile |ˈjentīl| adjective 1 ( Gentile) not Jewish |
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^There's so much people that have done that stupid thing, I can't really comprehend what they intend with it.
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COOL got a sec?
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i often wonder if comments like that on here are meant as jokes
or if it's a prime example of people completely not paying attention to critiques when they post links |
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maybe iy is time for a second version?
That would save me the Long Long, long ,long looong long long Scroll down each time. Maybe add some color and gradients. Arrows would also do nicely. |
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That was way nicer and more helpful than leaving vaguely bitchy comments in the comments section of my design (which in my opinion is WAY ruder than what I did).
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would u check mine ...
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thats your opinion, i dont mind it at all if people leave links on my design, i like looking at other ppls art
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as this seems to be happening a lot, is there a way to add this in the submit guidelines? Just so that newbies know about it from the beginning. Just my thought.
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Check out mine!