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v1 fresh beets, 1891 days ago, click to expand
v2 fresh beets, current version








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renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
toned down a bit



Tone Loc ..yo!
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
v2
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
Hello.

Is there anybody in there?

Just nod if you can hear me.

Is there anyone home?
J-Ray
J-Ray on Mar 22 '07
start with a richer color for the beets... like the actual color of beets =) I think the colors need work but I like the idea. Instead of drawing a continuous flow of bricks, why not a hint of bricks here and there?
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
thx J Ray :-)
special  k
special k on Mar 22 '07
i feel like the illustration has a bit too much of a paint type feel-

perhaps some more detail on... everything?

i dont think the simplistic nature of this particular design will go over all that well.

good luck anyway!
victimofopportunity
victimofopportunity on Mar 22 '07
^ I agree with J-Ray



That'd make the design a lot better
special  k
special k on Mar 22 '07
i didnt intend for it to sound mean, it just came out that way.

sorry-

:(
special  k
special k on Mar 22 '07
or maybe just the boombox needs some detailing.

ok- so far

1. richer colors

2. details on boombox

good luck.
peater
peater on Mar 22 '07
Ya, it's definitely the color scheme. The first version is too neon, but the second one is kinda faded. Find a palette that's vibrant, but not too shiny and bright.
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
yay, thank you all.

I do think the neon version caused my headache



v3 in the works
r.o.b.o.t.i.c.octopus
   r.o.b.o.t.i.c.octopus on Mar 22 '07
i think better drawrin' skillz is in order to pull this off he way you seem to want it.
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
^ damn, that's cold!



I don't think that the case.

I know my "computer drawing" skills need work











sagral
sagral on Mar 22 '07
try to do a collage w photos then trace averything.
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
i think maybe i should draw, then scan



J-Ray
J-Ray on Mar 22 '07
Yeah even though the 80's were all about the neon. bright. florescent. colors... they'll still hurt your score!
staffell
   staffell on Mar 22 '07
ooooooooooeeeeeeeeeeeeeoooooooooooo killer tofu
renfrue
   renfrue on Mar 22 '07
haha, yea staffell (Doug was the best)
peater
peater on Mar 23 '07
I would wear this. The text could be more graffiti-like-- it already is, but go way over the top to really crank the funk factor.
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