Any Suggestions?

maybe just a little more of the flower design behind the skull

Sorry, guys, but Threadless was giving me an error message when I tried to upload. And it wasn't redirecting me properly. So imagine my surprise when I find I've uploaded three new versions of the design!



Anyway, hope you like it. Please give me some feedback so I can polish it up to submit soon.

nice work! maybe give the snake a tongue



critique mine, too?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/15789/I_better_hit_two_of_you

the scales in the snake maybe need to be changed. To me they are a bit bulky and the color is a bit off. maybe make them smaller and desaturate a bit

Pretty cool.

Thanks. To be honest, I hadn't even considered changing the scales or the snake, but I definitely like the tongue idea and I'll play with the scales. I was more worried about the additions from the first version, the halftone flowers in purple and pink. Do they add to the image, you think?

a color, not brown, maybe cream, would be better, i thinks

Have you tried to reduce it a bit and center it? I think it's going to print nicely... by the way, I've done some small changes to mine acorrding to your comment:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/15566/Opposites_Attracts#v9

Ok, I added the tongue...



I tried a lighter shirt, but the gold-ish color didn't have enough contrast. If there's more interest in brightening the shirt, I'd consider changing the whole color scheme. Ditto for the scales. I removed a few, but I prefer the slightly chunkier scales to stand out against the fine spatter of distress on the pattern.



And I tried a more conventional centered position on the shirt. What do you think?

I love the design! if you don't get anywhere here submit it to Levi's, they are doing t-shirts with this feel of work

This is very cool. I feel like it could be even larger on the shirt. That's my one and only criticism

another very cool here dude

Thanks all. I guess I'll be submitting soon, so any final thoughts before we get to that? Should I try and do that lighter tan color as a gold ink? Anything?

One last version. This is pretty evenly matched with v6 - I just changed the snake's scales and I don't know which I like better. Please let me know your preference, and I'll move on!

great color, and style, I think sub it as it is.



I'm a little tired of skull designs but as skulls go

this one is really cool.

Ah, heck with it. It's live as of this week. No new changes. Thanks for all the help!

Kewl design, I'll give it a 5 when it is up.