The daughters of pure white light.

very cool, needs something more though, not sure what...but nice illies

Thanks! Do you think it needs something to make the idea clearer, or just something to fill up the shirt differently?

Maybe you could get rid of the "branch" and enlarge the white one, put her on the belly area and have her refracting into the colors (that are above boob level, more on the chest area).

I like this a lot as well. I like that you have slightly different hair for each color. I like it as is, just on a different color shirt to make the colors pop.



Flying V has a great idea as well with the refraction.

That refraction idea is great! I'll have to think about that one to figure out how to make hair look like it's refracting.



In the meantime, how do you feel about a darker color to make all the hair pop a bit? Dark gray seemed to work the best with all the colors.

i prefer the light blue version

Now that I see it on a dark shirt I like the lighter version as well.

the lighter one was way better :)

Alright, lighter blue it is. Any other suggestions for changes before I post a new critique?

It's sort of a trade off between the colored hair (better on the light blue) and the white hair (better on the dark), but I like the light blue better. maybe go for an intermediate color that would complement both?

The problem with the intermediate colors is that I kept losing one hair color or another. It seems like there was something wrong with every color but the dark gray.